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The chill in the breeze,
The frost on the ground,
Crisp on a moonlit night.

A young boy's figure
Glides through the streets,
His breath a clouded fog.

Eyes like crystals,
Hair like snow,
He walks with staff in hand.

Alone in the world,
Unseen by all,
He strides like a ghost through the town.

Young children seen
Through a window pane,
Bask in the glow of the hearth.

Unseen goes the boy
Who stares unnoticed and lost
At the joy before his eyes.

A tentative move,
A soft hand to the glass,
Which freezes beneath his touch.

He turns away,
To the dark of the night
And raises his head to the sky.

A tear flows unseen,
Silent and soft,
To be dashed on the frozen earth.

Calling winds forth,
Around him to swirl,
His feet lift off from the ground.

Invisible and alone,
He flies higher until
He melds with the sky and the stars.

"I want to be seen
And I want to be heard."
Only one hears this desperate boy's cry.

The Man in the Moon
Stares down on the scene,
At the lost and forgotten child.

"Don't fret dear Jack,
It will not be forever,
One day you will be seen and heard.

The great mighty Four
Will be turned then to five,
As the Guardians all stand as one."

The boy does not hear,
The boy does not know
What the Man in the Moon has in store.

So he does his job well,
He flies over the Earth,
Bringing chilled winds and snow in his wake.

He knows who he is,
He knows who he should be.
He's the spirit of winter,
Jack Frost.
This is just a random poem I thought up whilst bored shitless one night. :bored:
I'm not sure if it's any good, you-the lovely people of DeviantART-are the first to read this! Please review and tell me what you think!
For those who don't get what this is about and/or don't know me; this is about Jack Frost from the yet-to-be-realeased-in-my-country movie "Rise of the Guardians". It sort of touches on the emotional strain that Jack must go through every day because he can't be seen.
I hope you-the reader-like this poem. I do try.
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LadyRavenClaw Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
the way this reads reminds of this movie I watched...something like "Rise of the Guardians".  Good movie and this fits to the T until the end...love it!  Great job!
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TheBTSliverWolf Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013   General Artist
Loe it! So sad, yet so... uplifting away. You know? The world always has things in store for the ones who feel lost and are unsuspecting. :)
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hikarisharp18 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Artist
*looking at the picture very seriously...*
Me: Jack was here... I'm in the right way...
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incogxito Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job dear... <3
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batgirl987 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
amazing work!!!!!!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!! :D
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JoKuLFrOsTiGuArDiAn Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i am CRYING right now! thank you very much! jk. i love this.
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can grasp a very detailed image when I read this! This is truly a work of art :)
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BSG222 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What an amazing jack frost poem!
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JackFrosts1girl Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Writer
I still love it!!! Open your eyes and see, Open your ears and hear, Open your heart and Believe.
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LiteraryTemptress Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Loved the movie and I love this piece:)
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FrosttBite Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
i love all your work! this poem is beautiful! the picture is perfect!! i feel i could just jump in!!!
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Fionna-the-human1243 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
EPIC
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FelinoOmbra Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's wonderful♥
Yesterday I watched the movie and I loved it. Youre poem is really touching and good. Like the movie it changed my mind about winter, snow and much more.
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! I really tried to make this a happy poem, but it turned out to be a touching and sad-ish poem instead....
I'm going to see the movie soon, once it comes out. I know that it's going to be great!! :happybounce:
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1nightpheonix Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow its so good
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spellformurder16 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
wow this amazing i love it u should do more :D my favorite part is "A tear flows unseen,
Silent and soft,
To be dashed on the frozen earth." it's just awesome :D please wright more.
For me :D
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! That's actually the part of this poem that I'm most proud of. :D
I will try, I often just have random bursts of inspiration and things like this just pop into my head. I hardly have to think.
I'll try to do more. No promises though, I'm finding that free time is getting few and far between nowdays. Thanks for commenting!
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spellformurder16 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
well it is amazing i hope you do more but u don't have to me too i get random bursts of inspiration almost all the time but i am an bad poetic but your just amazing don't u ever give up no mater what anybody says :)
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andrewk Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
wait, so if I cannot see him in THIS photo, then I DO NOT believe in him, but I AM LOOKING for him and know he's there, so I DO, but--* HEADESPLODIE!*
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Writer
I'll give you a hint, he's NOT in the photo. It was just a nice picture.......
Please don't hurt yourself trying to find him.....:iconbeggingplz:
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andrewk Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
lol Okay. XD
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Roozilla13 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is gorgeous. I would love to write music for it, with your permission.
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
Sure, as long as I get to see it and approve it before it gets published anywhere.
What sort of instrument will you use? Any possibility you could do it in Piano?
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Roozilla13 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Totally! I actually play piano better than anything else :3
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome! I play too, so I could play the music to my own song! You you do something more classical? Soft and sweet? I like that sort of thing!
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Roozilla13 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm so glad you didn't ask for upbeat and "rockin" oJo I would never have been able to do it if you had.
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Aki0kun Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
someone make a song of this,NOW!
this is awsome
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! This is what I do when I'm bored.
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KaChieek Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I SEE YOU JACK ;w;
I love this poem omg
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JackFrosts1girl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
It is really ture and beautiful. I feel so bad for Jack Frost. He is a really nice guy. We should take notice in him. Like you said he might be crying for someone to see and hear him. If we just open our eyes and look we might just see him. And if we open our ears we might hear him too. All we have to do is believe and he might just show up.*cries abit*. I do wish people could see him for who he is.
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Writer
I know! I hate the fact that he had to live for 300 YEARS being invisible to everyone. It's tragic, really...*sniff sniff*
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JackFrosts1girl Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Writer
I KNOW!!! It's so unfair!! If I could have 1 wish I would switch places with Jack so we can see life through each others eyes. That would be beautiful.
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phycoartist12 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ARG DA WONT LET ME FAVORITE THIS
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
It wont? Try the button in the top-ish righthand side of the page. It should say "add to favourites"
If that button isn't there, then I don't know what's wrong.
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phycoartist12 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok i got it... I just missed it :dummy:
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MyNameIsKy Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
ooo.... i love the poem! n d picture is just so beautiful!
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JackFrosts1girl Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
I LOVE IT!! AND ITS SO TURE!!! I'M WITH JACK ON THIS ONE!!!
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Flowerintherain77 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
that is a gorgous shot!!!!
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Bbeyondbilla Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
what a lovely poem and picture! :)
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ACBeaam Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I wish I was in that forest!
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Bronwe Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
It's amazing
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bringcastle Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
How it beutefull!
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LLPR Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
awesome :)
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Matreon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is great!
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Hazelmallorn Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Writer
Holy crap...beautifully written!! :)
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you...:blushes:
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Hazelmallorn Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Writer
Welcome :)
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LaCiCi Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I REALLY need to watch this movie now OuOb
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CassadySilverlin Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Breathtaking! :)
:heart::heart::iconbigheartplz::heart::heart:
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Jack-Frost12 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!:blushes:
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