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The chill in the breeze,
The frost on the ground,
Crisp on a moonlit night.

A young boy's figure
Glides through the streets,
His breath a clouded fog.

Eyes like crystals,
Hair like snow,
He walks with staff in hand.

Alone in the world,
Unseen by all,
He strides like a ghost through the town.

Young children seen
Through a window pane,
Bask in the glow of the hearth.

Unseen goes the boy
Who stares unnoticed and lost
At the joy before his eyes.

A tentative move,
A soft hand to the glass,
Which freezes beneath his touch.

He turns away,
To the dark of the night
And raises his head to the sky.

A tear flows unseen,
Silent and soft,
To be dashed on the frozen earth.

Calling winds forth,
Around him to swirl,
His feet lift off from the ground.

Invisible and alone,
He flies higher until
He melds with the sky and the stars.

"I want to be seen
And I want to be heard."
Only one hears this desperate boy's cry.

The Man in the Moon
Stares down on the scene,
At the lost and forgotten child.

"Don't fret dear Jack,
It will not be forever,
One day you will be seen and heard.

The great mighty Four
Will be turned then to five,
As the Guardians all stand as one."

The boy does not hear,
The boy does not know
What the Man in the Moon has in store.

So he does his job well,
He flies over the Earth,
Bringing chilled winds and snow in his wake.

He knows who he is,
He knows who he should be.
He's the spirit of winter,
Jack Frost.
This is just a random poem I thought up whilst bored shitless one night. :bored:
I'm not sure if it's any good, you-the lovely people of DeviantART-are the first to read this! Please review and tell me what you think!
For those who don't get what this is about and/or don't know me; this is about Jack Frost from the yet-to-be-realeased-in-my-country movie "Rise of the Guardians". It sort of touches on the emotional strain that Jack must go through every day because he can't be seen.
I hope you-the reader-like this poem. I do try.
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LadyRavenClaw Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
the way this reads reminds of this movie I watched...something like "Rise of the Guardians".  Good movie and this fits to the T until the end...love it!  Great job!
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TheBTSliverWolf Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013   General Artist
Loe it! So sad, yet so... uplifting away. You know? The world always has things in store for the ones who feel lost and are unsuspecting. :)
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hikarisharp18 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Artist
*looking at the picture very seriously...*
Me: Jack was here... I'm in the right way...
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incogxito Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job dear... <3
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batgirl987 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
amazing work!!!!!!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!! :D
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JoKuLFrOsTiGuArDiAn Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i am CRYING right now! thank you very much! jk. i love this.
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can grasp a very detailed image when I read this! This is truly a work of art :)
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BSG222 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What an amazing jack frost poem!
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JackFrosts1girl Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Writer
I still love it!!! Open your eyes and see, Open your ears and hear, Open your heart and Believe.
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LiteraryTemptress Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Loved the movie and I love this piece:)
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